Walt: make connections with what we read, and what we have read before.
Task description: today we had create our own Astronaut profile. we also had to draw a picture using 8 bit art.
For this term i would like to learn and research about one single topic Who was first man to even invent technology? Because ever since i was in year 1 i would use a I pad i did not how this was made and days went by I thought is a Chromebook invented. But Mr Goodwin if you are reading this do not stress out for making extreme hard work take it easy. ![]() |
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Introduction Rubric
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Hook
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My introduction is boring.
It is difficult to read.
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My introduction is easy to read and has some interest for my audience.
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My audience is hooked into my subject, it grabs their interest so they feel like they want to read more.
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When someone reads my introduction they are left feeling intrigued. They can't wait to read more.
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Orientation
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My introduction does not tell the reader what my writing is going to be about.
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My audience has some idea about what I am writing about.
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My audience is clear what I am writing about.
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My introduction lets the reader know the direction and purpose of my writing.
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