Eating Crickets in Real life

W.A.L.T: write an recount.
Today is Thursday which means we have Mrs Stickland, as i step inside the door i realized that we will be eating insects, I was shocked. I turned my head and I saw the package. Which means we were having our very own FEAR FACTOR!

Everybody was brave except for me i was a spectator, because I was absolutely petrified. I looked at  everyone and I was feeling like I was gonna spew up even though i never ate any.

For me I will never like to taste insects ever. It looks yuck and disgusting. Maybe you guys should try it and let me know what you think.

Task description: today our teacher Mrs stickland fed us dead crickets. i was not brave but other students were. this was because we are learning about bugs and insects so today we wrote an recount.

Nasibah pollution letter

Point England School

130 Pt England Road

Point England

Auckland

NZ  

Thursday 25th August 2016

Dear Prime Minister,

Greetings, my name is Nasibah and I am a year 5 student at Pt England school. I am wanting to inform you that there has been a big issue in New Zealand. People in New Zealand have been littering everywhere, such as rivers, oceans, lakes and this is not a healthy environment. People are now living in an environment where people are getting sick all the time. This is an estimate of how much rubbish has been littered around Auckland 103,247,609! I think hundreds of people are going to be unhappy about this amount.

I think New Zealand has to step up. I think that you have to bring an strict rule to New Zealand e.g. put rubbish bins around certain places, or hire more wardens/security guards to patrol our beaches.

You need to do something now because our country has been obsessed over all the littering that has been happening. And I also think that you should release an message for littering that way we will atleast have a good environment.

Your Sincerely: Nasibah

A true photo

My Extension artwork

This is a picture that is exactly explaining  my story.

Narrative - Final version

Kaiya's heart started to pound like a ball bouncing on the ground. She heard horrifying news that nearly made her cry! A huge battle was about to happen and her whole village was involved. Kaiya lived in a large village in the Pacific and was the chiefs only daughter. Kaiya said to her father “why we are involved in this battle?” Her father replied “because I sent a challenge to all the other villages to prove that we are the best”. Kaiya was frightened as she knew that many people would die if they had a war.

Later that day, the enemies soon attacked Kaiya's village. The warriors were fighting as the women and children were crying and trying to save themselves. Kaiya's father and his warriors fought their enemies bravely. But they did not realize something! Kaiya was being kidnapped!

The battle kept going throughout the night. It was getting worse and as Kaiya was kidnapped she could do nothing. She was in a cold dark cave. Kaiya's mouth was tied up she could not talk because she had something covering her mouth. A man walked over to Kaiya and said "If you try to run away you will be in more danger".  

Suddenly Kaiya's father ran into the cave with his warriors. They attacked the enemies and rescued Kaiya. Luckily the village had won the battle and they found the chiefs only daughter.

My narrative story (Extension)

Kaiya's heart started to pound like a ball bouncing on the ground. She heard horrifying news that nearly made her cry! There was a huge war happening and her whole village was involved. Kaiya lived in a large village in the Pacific and was the chiefs only daughter.

Kaiya said to her dad “why we are involved in this war?” Her dad said “because I sent a challenge to all the other villages to prove that we are the best”. They headed out to the war and it started. Kaiya's dad was finding his way towards his enemies, but he did not realize something! His daughter was being kidnapped!

The war was getting worse and Kaiya was kidnapped she had nothing to do. He had 1 idea, which needed 2 people. Out of the big crowd there was one man who came near the person who was about to kidnap Kaiya. The person who was looking forward to kidnap Kaiya looked back and saw the man he said "why are you kidnapping a girl" and the man stood there and said " i do not know why i am doing this but i will carry on". Kaiya's mouth was tied up she could not talk because she had a kind of scarf over her mouth. The man walked to Kaiya and took the scarf off and said "run away you will be in more danger.  

Suddenly the man punched the kidnapper and the kidnapper said "sorry" and he ran in to the forest's. And after the were happy again.

Nasibah Descriptive Writing