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Friday, 26 February 2016

Nasibah Short story

Walt: write stories with a complete orientation, problem, and resolution
Task description we had to write stories in complete orientation problem and resolution



Once upon a time there was a donkey named Alvin. He loved going shopping but he'd have to go toilet every time he went shopping. He was really stinky he had made the toilet stink.


One day Alvin was ready to go… shopping! so he got ready but did not go to the toilet. Once they got there they started  shopping. Soon there trolly was half way full but guess what Alvin was busting, he ran to the pak n save staff  and asked “where is the toilet” he did not use his manners but one of the staffs told him where the toilet was.


His parents went to the cashier to pay Alvin came running, the toilet was stink when alvin was finished, he ran and stopped when he got to his parents. One of the staffs were going to the speaker the speaker was pretty close to the toilet as soon as she started speaking she smelt something bad coming from the toilet she quickly said “kia ora everyone it is 10 min away till pak n save will be closed”.

She walked quickly to the cashier and told Alvin's parents that he had to clean the toilet. From then he learnt a lesson to go to the toilet before he goes shopping and else.

Nasibah landslide

Tuesday, 23 February 2016

Nasibah short story


Walt: write stories with a complete orientation, problem, and resolution

Once upon a time there was a donkey named Alvin. He loved going shopping but he'd have to go toilet every time he went shopping. He was really stinky he had made the toilet stink.


One day Alvin was ready to go… shopping! so he got ready but did not go to the toilet. Once they got there they started  shopping. Soon there trolley was half way full but guess what Alvin was busting, he ran to the pak n save staff  and asked “where is the toilet” he did not use his manners but one of the staffs told him where the toilet was.


His parents went to the cashier to pay alvin came running, the toilet was stink when Alvin was finished, he ran and stopped when he got to his parents. One of the staffs were going to the speaker the speaker was pretty close to the toilet as soon as she started speaking she smelt something bad coming from the toilet she quickly said “kia ora everyone it is 10 min away till Pak n save will be closed”.

She walked quickly to the cashier and told Alvin's parents that he had to clean the toilet. From then he learnt a lesson to go to the toilet before he goes shopping and else.


Task description: today we learnt how to write sentences and come back to the mat and talk about what we wrote about.

Thursday, 18 February 2016

Tuesday, 16 February 2016

Narrative writing

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WALT: understand the features of narrative writing.

once upon a time there was little girl named Megan her parents name was Josephine and Jones who wanted to go to the park with her family so they packed all the food and went off. After five houses they  ran to the park and started playing. after 10 minutes they went swimming at the beach suddenly  there parents got hungry and tired after sitting for 20 minutes. They heard someone screaming  let's ha
ve a party! the parents stood up with excitement and they saw their cousins they parked their van and came down with 2 big baskets and a  small sized table they sat down the children dried up but did not change. They had K.F.C,  Pepsi,  pavlova, ice cream and chocolate. Then the cousin kids went and got changed and hit to the dive. Soon they screamed out FISH they had found a fish  there cousins brang a plastic to keep the rubbish in but they had two so the used one keep the fish in  Megan poured some water  in with her hand.





Wednesday, 10 February 2016

Thursday, 4 February 2016

Wednesday, 3 February 2016

Nasibah Mt wellington+volcano

Walt: follow instructions and present work to a high standard.



                                       
             Task Discription:
Today i learnt that mt wellington and one tree hill was erapted 10 million years ago everytime we went pass the mountain i will look at it i would think i should walk up that mountain or run but then i am scared if i fall down.