Cross Country Day!

Walt: structure a recount. 

Last week Friday everyone at Pt England School had participated in our School cross country. It was extremely hot and really muddy, I felt so tired. I had already been looking at the course and it looked harder than you guys think finally it is over now. Have you ever participated in a cross country before?  

As I was sitting down on the hard, hot court everyone was really nervous for their turn to run. People was singing, cheering and talking about the race and how long it will be. Every 10 minutes we put sunscreen on.

The clapper went and i pushed myself to run hard out. On the bottom field i started to have that stitch again, then i remembered that Mr Burt said you start it you finish it. I stepped over the muddy patches and i tried my best.

After the race i was happy to be back and not to be on the run anymore. I’ve always hated running but when it comes to this time of the year i really want to come 1st 2nd or 3rd. Last year i had come 4th this year i came around 7 - 6 but i was still happy, it doesn’t really matter you just need to have a good health and be fit.

I had learnt a lot of things 1 of them was i had to practice running because i was really lazy to run i had stopped halfway thinking that i will be walking the rest. Now i am trying to cut down sweet things so wish me luck it all starts soon.

Task description: today we had to write a recount of what happened and what we did last week Friday. we have also structured this into the right order.

Narrative writing

WALT: understand the features of narrative writing.

once upon a time there was little girl named Megan her parents name was Josephine and Jones who wanted to go to the park with her family so they packed all the food and went off. After five houses they  ran to the park and started playing. after 10 minutes they went swimming at the beach suddenly  there parents got hungry and tired after sitting for 20 minutes. They heard someone screaming  let's ha

ve a party! the parents stood up with excitement and they saw their cousins they parked their van and came down with 2 big baskets and a  small sized table they sat down the children dried up but did not change. They had K.F.C,  Pepsi,  pavlova, ice cream and chocolate. Then the cousin kids went and got changed and hit to the dive. Soon they screamed out FISH they had found a fish  there cousins brang a plastic to keep the rubbish in but they had two so the used one keep the fish in  Megan poured some water  in with her hand.