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Showing posts with label narritive. Show all posts
Showing posts with label narritive. Show all posts

Thursday, 5 July 2018

Being a Soldier!

The Question: Do you want to be in the army or be a soldier?

What would it feel like to be a soldier? I would be really nervous, because you have to fight other people and it would be scary. What is you die! I’d have a really weird and tense feeling.

To be honest i will never want to be in an army war etc. I just can't risk my life dying in an army/war or see other people die, it is sad. It’s better to just live your life as long as you can, rather than risking your life dying or killing other people.

Would you want to be in the army? I want to know if you want to be in the army. And why you want to be in the army? I mean like if you would like to be in the army reach your goals and go for it but i don't think that being in the army is on my dream list.

Wednesday, 29 June 2016

narritive story

W.A.L.T: write a narrative.


Super kid

Super kid is the queen of lights. She has black eyes and a stunning outfit. One day she decided to go to the supermarket. So she got ready in her ordinary clothes, but she also had her superhero clothes in a plastic bag in-case. On her way there she found out that someone was annoying her by tickling her ears. She hit to an stop and looked around she saw none she carried on. After 10-15 min something annoyed her again this time she stopped looked around and saw a evil man with a duster in his hand. Super kid ran to the side and transformed as fast as she could and all of sudden they were fighting. Super kid was hiding in the A.N.Z building. Out of the blues the ugly evil man came and Super kid was already snapping of the lights to make it dark and The evil man got dizzy and fell into a deep sleep.Super Kid was calling the police to discard this person. Super Kid transformed back to normal and was living happily ever after.


Wednesday, 1 June 2016

Nasibah superhero story

Walt: write a narrative story.


Did you know that Super-girl has saved a thousand people’s life from danger?. At pt England school everyone was having their morning tea but something happened that frightened them.

Out of nowhere there came a big large monkey at Point England school, Everybody was Playing outside and with panic they all hit to  an rush they ran to their class but the some of the classes were locked some were open. They all split up to find their teachers. Then Mrs Nua saw the monkey she started jumping up and down with her amazing high heels that she nearly fell so she walked as fast as could and said “attention i need all of you staff to run to you classes and open the doors for the kids to go in because there is a large monkey” with a funny voice. The office lady Miss Flavelle said “we should call Super-girl”. Super-girl answered I will be there A.S.A.P. When Super-girl came the monkey started to act like it was normal monkey so Super-girl decided. To take the large monkey to the zoo some how.

Then Super-girl had an idea she went to the monkey and said monkey love bananas so why don't we get some bananas and walk it to the zoo and he will follow us. And he actually ended up in the zoo locked up and was acting like a normal butterfly than Super-girl found out that the monkey was hungry.


Thursday, 3 March 2016

Nasibah the three little pigs story

W.A.L.T: retell a story 

Once upon a time there was three pigs they lived with their mother. One day they went of to play outside they  went near the forest and they saw a beautiful place. So they decided to build their own houses and live there.  

So one pig made his house out of sticks. Another pig made his house with straw. Another house was made out of bricks. They were Bringing their straw, bricks,sticks to make their homes. One pig made a house with straws he was happy and wanted to sleep cause he was so tired.

Another pig made his house with sticks he was happy and started dancing the whole time. The other pig was building his house with bricks when he was finished he was relaxing.
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Soon the big bad wolf came and said can i come please the pig in the straw  house said not by my hair on chinnie chin chin. The wolf said then i will huff and puff and blow your house in so he blowed and  the pig  ran to the stick house pig and said let me in i am your brother so he raced in and the wolf said let me in and the pig said not by the hair of my chiny chin chin so i will huff and i'll puff and i will blow your house away so he blowed the house of sticks and both the pigs ran to the other brothers house so he opened the door and closed the door before the bad wolf would come in. He said LIttle pigs LIttle pigs let me come in the pig said not by my hair on my chiny chin chin the wolf said then i will huff the i will puff and i will blow your house down. so he did as he said and blowed and blowed and blowed but the house was made out bricks are really strong.

He could not do it so the wolf made another plan he climbed the house and walked to the chimney the pigs could hear the wolf walking they quickly put on a fire the wolf went down and burnt his bottom he screamed ahhhhhhhhhh he ran away and the three little pigs lived happily ever after. THE END.  

Task description: We watched 4 versions of three little pigs so we can retell.









Tuesday, 23 February 2016

Nasibah short story


Walt: write stories with a complete orientation, problem, and resolution

Once upon a time there was a donkey named Alvin. He loved going shopping but he'd have to go toilet every time he went shopping. He was really stinky he had made the toilet stink.


One day Alvin was ready to go… shopping! so he got ready but did not go to the toilet. Once they got there they started  shopping. Soon there trolley was half way full but guess what Alvin was busting, he ran to the pak n save staff  and asked “where is the toilet” he did not use his manners but one of the staffs told him where the toilet was.


His parents went to the cashier to pay alvin came running, the toilet was stink when Alvin was finished, he ran and stopped when he got to his parents. One of the staffs were going to the speaker the speaker was pretty close to the toilet as soon as she started speaking she smelt something bad coming from the toilet she quickly said “kia ora everyone it is 10 min away till Pak n save will be closed”.

She walked quickly to the cashier and told Alvin's parents that he had to clean the toilet. From then he learnt a lesson to go to the toilet before he goes shopping and else.


Task description: today we learnt how to write sentences and come back to the mat and talk about what we wrote about.