Tuesday, 23 February 2016

Nasibah short story

Walt: write stories with a complete orientation, problem, and resolution

Once upon a time there was a donkey named Alvin. He loved going shopping but he'd have to go toilet every time he went shopping. He was really stinky he had made the toilet stink.

One day Alvin was ready to go… shopping! so he got ready but did not go to the toilet. Once they got there they started  shopping. Soon there trolley was half way full but guess what Alvin was busting, he ran to the pak n save staff  and asked “where is the toilet” he did not use his manners but one of the staffs told him where the toilet was.

His parents went to the cashier to pay alvin came running, the toilet was stink when Alvin was finished, he ran and stopped when he got to his parents. One of the staffs were going to the speaker the speaker was pretty close to the toilet as soon as she started speaking she smelt something bad coming from the toilet she quickly said “kia ora everyone it is 10 min away till Pak n save will be closed”.

She walked quickly to the cashier and told Alvin's parents that he had to clean the toilet. From then he learnt a lesson to go to the toilet before he goes shopping and else.

Task description: today we learnt how to write sentences and come back to the mat and talk about what we wrote about.

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