Friday, 27 February 2015


L.O: To write an effective recount
L.O: To write effective sentences using interesting beginnings and juicy vocab

With   Excitement  we were  walking to the the pools we laughed and giggled we finally we got there we had to calm down a bit.

Before we entered the pool  we had a shower but some of the  people only got half wet.

As I got out of the pool my teeth started chattering with coldness.

next time i will try and improve my swimming.

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