Descriptive Writting

Immersion assembly

W.A.L.T: use exiting language

Welcome back guys. So today we had a warm start of from immersion assembly. It was crazy and teachers were dressed up as part of what their team was learning about this term.

The school topic for this term is Now That is Thinking. Teams 1 - 3 is learning all about kites and Matariki.

The one and only  team 4 is learning all about. What Kind Of Technology Did the Maori People Use Before The Pakeha Arrived In New Zealand.

For this term i would like to learn and research about one single topic Who was first man to even invent technology? Because ever since i was in year 1 i would use a I pad i did not how this was made and days  went by I thought is a Chromebook invented. But Mr Goodwin if you are reading this do not stress out for making extreme hard work take it easy.

Overall i think that the new theme for this term is quite fascinating  because i love technology more than paper or book.
Task description: this task was much more of a recount becuase we had immersion assembly and then we did literacy. 

Eating Crickets in Real life

W.A.L.T: write an recount.
Today is Thursday which means we have Mrs Stickland, as i step inside the door i realized that we will be eating insects, I was shocked. I turned my head and I saw the package. Which means we were having our very own FEAR FACTOR!

Everybody was brave except for me i was a spectator, because I was absolutely petrified. I looked at  everyone and I was feeling like I was gonna spew up even though i never ate any.

For me I will never like to taste insects ever. It looks yuck and disgusting. Maybe you guys should try it and let me know what you think.

Task description: today our teacher Mrs stickland fed us dead crickets. i was not brave but other students were. this was because we are learning about bugs and insects so today we wrote an recount.

Nasibah Food web

W.A.L.T: make connections across multiple texts

For those of you who do not know what this is. this is a ecosystem food web. which contains insectlazor eating grass as well illusion spider eats grass fish eats illusion spider illusion spider eats ants polar bears eats fish. and this all happens in a cycle just like a water cycle which water rotates through different stuffs.

Task: description: today we had to write  about  the food web that contains our insect and spider that we created.

Nasibah Illusion spider

Walt: write narrative using descriptive language.My spider once was very communicative it was not harmful back then. Now when i go in my garden i find Illusion spider every time. One day  i went outside and i couldn’t find illusion spider so started looking for it i asked the next door neighbor and they said not sure check near our car. My eyes catched the dog. I heard their dog barking i was shocked i knew something is going on, i went near their gate where the dog was locked up i looked at the furious deliberately looking dog and  looked beside it and i found my spider. All of a sudden i saw my spider started its illusion attack and the dog was suddenly asleep. As weeks past the spider was gone and  it was never to be seen again Task description: today i had to write about my spider so i have written my beginning, middle, end.

Ladybugs

W.A.L.T: use in interesting vocabulary in our writing
A ladybug is a very tiny beetle. The colors of ladybugs make it attractive, the most common is red with black polka dots. For such a little bug it has an enormous appetite eating up to 75 aphids a day!

Task description: today we had to write some facts about bugs but not ordinary bugs we had to choose out of  Mosquitoes, Ladybugs, dung beetle, bumble bee

Nasibah Native Bird

W.A.L.T: we are learning to write persuasively.

What are some native birds around tamaki? It would be great if we could have some more native birds around tamaki so we can find out more about birds

I think that there should be more of Toutouwai Native Bird in New Zealand because i would like to know some of the features and beauty of Toutouwai.

I would also love to see some Takahe because i have never heard of this bird and i would like to find some of its habitats and it behavior much more.

I want less of these seagulls because segal's have this bad habit of ripping rubbish bags.  So i would rather have some more different birds.

I would rather like to see more native birds than Non - Native birds. That is why tamaki needs more native bird.

TAKAHE

Toutouwai

Task description: This week we had to write persuasively. so today we are had to write about native birds persuasively 

Nasibah race recount

W.A.L.T : write an Recount.

Did you know that our teacher Mr Goodwin is a very crazy teacher. Today he told us to line up we are going to do something lame and fast so we put on our shoes and lined up outside our classroom. Unintentionally he now tells us to line up along the goal post.

At this minute he says GO! and I stood there for 10 seconds and then I went running i thought in my head why do teachers to this. On my way back I had tripped over a piece of rock I said “ I have had better experience than this cleaning my house and doing chores was better. After all everybody was lying on the grass and breathing like a bunch of sumo wrestlers puffing.

When I had tripped over all my thoughts had fallen out of my head and I was not confident to do my recount any more I was exhausted.  I think that my teacher has come back from Thailand and gotten far to crazy.

I would never want to do this again i have had enough of running already. Mr Goodwin if you are reading this please calm down that would be so nice.

Task Description: today Our teacher told us to line up along the goal post and he told us the instructions that we had to run to the other goal post and back.

Bird identification

Walt: make connections across multiple texts

today my task was to identify these 4 different type of birds that i have written about and if you see carefully maybe you can find a link to a website.

Newspaper tower

Have you ever constructed a Tower before? Well today I came to knowing that it will be a normal day. But when I come in class I saw my teacher sorting out newspapers,  That seemed a little weird. I was kind of convinced of what we were going to do.

When we were being told about the experience I was so excited. I had overfull of ideas in my mind I could not wait to explode those ideas out of my mind. My teacher ( Mr Goodwin ) was telling us instructions but I did not bother listening I was far too busy.

When we got to plan it I turned out that  none of my ideas exploded. When it was my turn Bethan would get frustrated and she would say nobody listens to  me and i would give my turn to her all the time.

But finally at last me and my group mix and matched all of our ideas and came with 1 plan.

As we were constructing the newspaper tower  we made a platform and then we tried to stick all the bits and pieces but it just wouldn't work. We tried different ways we scrunched up newspaper but it would just fall down and we couldn’t  stand it.

I would have to say that next time I would rather write about the weekends to be honest.

Chicken flavoured worms

Walt: write quality introductions.

Have you ever heard of delicious chicken worms?

Well my teacher just fed us chicken flavored worms, probably because he had 12 cups of coffee last night. I had fun looking at everyone.

Introduction Rubric
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Hook	My introduction is boring. It is difficult to read.	My introduction is easy to read and has some interest for my audience.	My audience is hooked into my subject, it grabs their interest so they feel like they want to read more.	When someone reads my introduction they are left feeling intrigued. They can't wait to read more.
Orientation	My introduction does not tell the reader what my writing is going to be about.	My audience has some idea about what I am writing about.	My audience is clear what I am writing about.	My introduction lets the reader know the direction and purpose of my writing.

Task description: in today's lesson we experience all about chicken noodles. i was laughing because my teacher had put it on peoples faces.

My native plant task

Walt: make connections across multiple texts.

Task description: today we were learning all about native to New Zealand so this was our task.

My cameras group

Walt: follow instructions and present work to a high standard.
Task Description: my task for today was write about my group cameras. So basically what i have written is  what is it, my experience, care, and a picture of me holding a camera.