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Thursday, 9 February 2017

Chicken flavoured worms

Walt: write quality introductions.
Have you ever heard of delicious chicken worms?
Well my teacher just fed us chicken flavored worms, probably because he had 12 cups of coffee last night. I had fun looking at everyone.

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Introduction Rubric

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Hook
My introduction is boring.
It is difficult to read.
My introduction is easy to read and has some interest for my audience.
My audience is hooked into my subject, it grabs their interest so they feel like they want to read more.
When someone reads my introduction they are left feeling intrigued. They can't wait to read more.
Orientation
My introduction does not tell the reader what my writing is going to be about.
My audience has some idea about what I am writing about.
My audience is clear what I am writing about.
My introduction lets the reader know the direction and purpose of my writing.
Task description: in today's lesson we experience all about chicken noodles. i was laughing because my teacher had put it on peoples faces.

Tuesday, 7 February 2017

My native plant task

Walt: make connections across multiple texts.

Task description: today we were learning all about native to New Zealand so this was our task.

Friday, 3 February 2017

My cameras group

Walt: follow instructions and present work to a high standard.
Task Description: my task for today was write about my group cameras. So basically what i have written is  what is it, my experience, care, and a picture of me holding a camera.

Tuesday, 6 December 2016

Nasibah washing powder experiment

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We made an experiment with two washing powders to see which was best. if you wanna see my full washing powder report, click here


Task Description: we did an experiment on washing powder to see which was better.                                                                                                                                                 Image result for supreme  washing powder

Tuesday, 29 November 2016

Pollution letter

Point England School
130 Pt England Road
Point England
Auckland
NZ  

Thursday 25th August 2016

Dear Prime Minister,

Greetings, my name is Nasibah and I am a year 5 student at Pt England school. I am wanting to inform you that there has been a big issue in New Zealand. People in New Zealand have been littering everywhere, such as rivers, oceans, lakes and this is not a healthy environment. People are now living in an environment where people are getting sick all the time. This is an estimate of how much rubbish has been littered around Auckland 103,247,609! I think hundreds of people are going to be unhappy about this amount.

I think New Zealand has to step up. I think that you have to bring an strict rule to New Zealand e.g. put rubbish bins around certain places, or hire more wardens/security guards to patrol our beaches.

You need to do something now because our country has been obsessed over all the littering that has been happening. And I also think that you should release an message for littering that way we will atleast have a good environment.

Your Sincerely: Nasibah