tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6463877277513993111.post8767177785985414371..comments2023-05-11T00:33:14.250+12:00Comments on Nasibah : 100 word challengePt England Blogs Administrator 2014Bhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07845137228130364482noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6463877277513993111.post-65704573374374583292018-05-02T22:08:35.312+12:002018-05-02T22:08:35.312+12:00haha thats funny Nasibahhaha thats funny NasibahAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6463877277513993111.post-1906762368757004272018-05-02T19:16:36.178+12:002018-05-02T19:16:36.178+12:00Hi Nasibah, you have written a really funny quick ...Hi Nasibah, you have written a really funny quick write here! I like the way that the antagonist (bad guy) was a crimson spider! You got some good vocabulary in and you followed the structure of narrative story with a beginning and end. What do you think you might do differently in our next quick write?Danni Stonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06470833379829179523noreply@blogger.com